Black Ghost

lol, thanks for that who NONONO! BAD MAGIC! thing. I'll make sure to change that dialouge. *slaps himself for not realizing what he'd done*.

Thanks a lot MetalHead!:D First of all, I know the dialogue is a little off, since I wrote this yesterday and wasn't really focusing on it. This is just a ...

It was a cold September morning when Joy unlocked the door to a deli she and her sister Linda worked in. They walked inside and were greeted by the familiar ...

Critique Initiated The hour was early. 3:06AM. The numbers on the display screen wavered, and I rubbed the sleep from my eyes anxiously, shifting around in my seat as I ...

I agree with the others in that you could of made this a little more deeper or more emotional. Although it was well written, I didn't really feel any emotion ...

I don't really see any typos in this and the imagery was really good. Great poem!

MY NAME:magicman/Tony WHAT I LIKE TO WRITE: Fantasy, thrillers, pretty much anything except historical fiction or romance.

I changed the name, what do you think?

i write the first draft on paper, then type up the second..

WOW :shock: That was very good Snoink....I enjoyed it. *walks off in shock* *Edit* Lol, I did think it was really good though. It was really unique, too, unlike most ...

Oh, I almost forgot! I will absolutely add the candy thing in there! *Edit*: It's been added.

Woo!!

I liked this, It had an interesting story to it.:wink: I was on the ground, sore from head to toe, Wondering how I came to feel like so. I would ...

One fine day inside the Matrix universe, Neo was was making his way over to the Oracle to ask her some important questions. Many people began staring at him, though, ...

Maybe this war isn't such a good idea...